[solved]Requests for a children story -work in progress

sis Faridunnisa for your opinions. We love the input our members give us mashaAllah. We'll look into the changes once sister Khadija checks them out. I think once the words get placed at the bottom of the picture, the sun will appear bored instead of angry though. It's funny, sometimes you need a picture to make you understand a scene and other times only words do it for you, and sometimes they both help each other along mashaAllah.

InshaAllah sister Khadija will note your thoughts on the matter sis. Perhaps Poppy could add a smile to the sun if Khadija thinks it's necessary inshaAllah.

Assalamou aleikoum warahmatoullah wa barakatou

this is perfect Mashallah, just what I wanted. But I took note of your comments , dear sis Faridunnisa (cheeky hey?? :hehe): Maybe the sun can have its running shoes back on my dear Poppy (ask sis Mabsoota, I think she put them in the cupboard under the stairs ) some rays and a wide smile.. but otherwise, perfect, just perfect !!!!

and I know, I will surpass the cheek of the cheekiest, but could I have a sunset picture, featuring a little house at the foot of a hill, maybe some light through the nearly drawn curtains, and a sun nearly down on the horizon (don't forget the running shoes neatly tucked next to it )

Indeed Inshallah I need this picture to conclude the story , I am asking with a ''pretty please'' dear sis Poppy, think you can do it? I think you can...

Love and

Khadi

InshaAllah Poppy will read your request sis Khadija and I'll pass on the running shoes to her sun, lol.


Here's the scene where the sun watches the kids entering the school.



http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p297/ummdove/EaselandInkGraphics/khadisschoolhouse.png


InshaAllah the concluding picture will be done soon, if Poppy can't, then I will try.

jazak Allah sis mabsoota for making it so good im sure sis khadijah will fall in love like me.

yes mashallah sun looks good in shoes.

I have one request when u end the story plz make sun with shoes ofcourse ur doing that but with flying laces also if sis khadija agreed.

ur right sis mabsoota abt the words n pictures both help each other.But im thinking abt just to arrange the pictures and then make a story.Like in school we show charts to kids and ask them what they can express and lol different stories frm one scene comes out.
InshAllah if sis khadija gives permission im going to add this one in activity classes.



Allah hafiz
Faridunnisa

lol sis mabsoota ur brilliant sun using a sunglasses. .I cant stop myself laughing.
OMG now im imagining sun using a sunscreen.

I shut out otherwise i go mad but its really too good.Jazak Allah for making me laugh so loudly.Thanks to Allah that dh is in office otherwise he'll come running.



Allah hafiz
Faridunnisa

As Salamu Alaikum

Masha Allah beautiful work by a great mother and daughter team.

Waiting for the complete story.

My mum helped me with the changes alhamdulillah.



http://i491.photobucket.com/albums/rr274/AmiraPoppy/khadisgarden-1.png

InshaAllah it's better now.

Poppy that is just outstanding masha'Allah!

machAllah sisters,congratulations for your wonderfull team work!!!
It's just fabulous machAllah,





fi amanillah
oumloubabah

another artist in THE HOUSEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

mashallah sis poppy and sis mabsoota, they are all great!!!!!!!