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Where would I be without Allah?

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Post  Aisha Thu Jan 08, 2009 11:28 pm

As-Salaamu alaikum

Where would I be without Allah?



Where would I be without Allah?
I really dread to think.
He's always been there for me,
when my life seemed 'on the brink',


He has always guided me, to Him all praises be
when I have had choices to make.
He has kept me safe along the way
May all my deeds be for His sake.


I have been in situations which, when I recall now, make me shudder!
Allah was there protecting me, my God, there is no other!


In happy times too He's always there
to thank for so many of our blessings,
When making important decisions,
Learning from life's lessons.


Where would I be without Allah?
I cannot answer that question.
I feel He's always been there for me you see,
So it's beyond my comprehension!



- all praises be to Allah, The Lord of the worlds,
And peace and blessings of Allah be upon our Blessed Prophet Muhammed.


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Post  Looli Thu Jan 08, 2009 11:47 pm

Salams..

Im your biggest fan, great poem masha'Allah!! pompoms
i cant wait for the third one Shout

Wa salam..
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Post  Munaqaba08 Fri Jan 09, 2009 2:19 am

As-Salaamu alaikum

I like your poem sis Thumbs Up . Question: Do you think the flow of this stanza
I have been in situations which, when I recall now, make me shudder!
would be smoother if you added the words "want to"? So it would read, "I have been in situations which, when I recall now, make me want to shudder!"

I'm only asking Hiding ...I don't know the 'beat' (so to speak) you had in mind when your wrote it.

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Post  Mabsoota Fri Jan 09, 2009 6:07 am

As-Salaamu alaikum

MashaAllah sister Aisha, it'll speak to alot of people. Shout keep up pinkflower
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Post  Guest Fri Jan 09, 2009 9:42 am

As-Salaamu alaikum

Mashallah sister that was beautiful, thank you for sharing Love
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Post  Zaza Fri Jan 09, 2009 2:03 pm

Where would I be without Allah? As05

Masha Allah a very touching poem, many of us can relate to it. Love

barakAllahu feeki
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Post  Aisha Sat Jan 10, 2009 12:14 pm

As-Salaamu alaikum

JazakumAllahu khairan dear sisters - I'm glad that you liked it.
I have been in situations which, when I recall now, make me shudder!
I appreciate your suggestion dear sister umm An-Nu'man jazakiAllahu khairan Hug but it would change the rhythm and the actual meaning. To give you a better idea of the rhythm there is a pause at each comma. wink
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Post  Munaqaba08 Sat Jan 10, 2009 6:47 pm

As-Salaamu alaikum

Sounds good! Thumbs Up

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Post  Amina Al-Bateeka Wed Jan 14, 2009 10:23 pm

As-Salaamu alaikum

It's a lovely poem, MashaAllah :D

pompoms pinkflower pinkstar barakAllahu feeki
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Post  Guest Fri Jan 16, 2009 4:48 pm

As-Salaamu alaikum

mashaAllah thats wonderful sis Love jazkallah khair for sharing Hug
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Post  founder Fri Jan 23, 2009 4:35 pm

As-Salaamu alaikum

I love this poem. Shout

It is so true.
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Post  ummTayyibah Sat Jan 31, 2009 10:48 pm

Wa Alaykum Assalaam wa Rahmatullahi wa Barakaatuh

MashaAllah this is so beautiful and true. Jazak Allahu khayr.
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Post  naturedelight09 Sun Feb 01, 2009 2:36 am

Where would I be without Allah? Th_salamwabarakatuhu

beautiful poem Sister Aisha. really makes you think Felix Jazakallahu Khairun for sharing smile

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Post  Aisha Thu Feb 19, 2009 7:10 pm

As-Salaamu alaikum

Wa jazakumAllahu khairan dear sisters - I am glad that you liked it wink
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