Where would I be without Allah?
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Where would I be without Allah?
Where would I be without Allah?
Where would I be without Allah?
I really dread to think.
He's always been there for me,
when my life seemed 'on the brink',
He has always guided me, to Him all praises be
when I have had choices to make.
He has kept me safe along the way
May all my deeds be for His sake.
I have been in situations which, when I recall now, make me shudder!
Allah was there protecting me, my God, there is no other!
In happy times too He's always there
to thank for so many of our blessings,
When making important decisions,
Learning from life's lessons.
Where would I be without Allah?
I cannot answer that question.
I feel He's always been there for me you see,
So it's beyond my comprehension!
- all praises be to Allah, The Lord of the worlds,
And peace and blessings of Allah be upon our Blessed Prophet Muhammed.
by Aisha Om-AbdulRahman
Aisha- Administrator
- Registration date : 2008-10-28
Re: Where would I be without Allah?
Salams..
Im your biggest fan, great poem masha'Allah!!
i cant wait for the third one
Wa salam..
Hajer~*
Im your biggest fan, great poem masha'Allah!!
i cant wait for the third one
Wa salam..
Hajer~*
Looli- Active Sister
- Registration date : 2008-10-30
Re: Where would I be without Allah?
I like your poem sis . Question: Do you think the flow of this stanza
would be smoother if you added the words "want to"? So it would read, "I have been in situations which, when I recall now, make me want to shudder!"I have been in situations which, when I recall now, make me shudder!
I'm only asking ...I don't know the 'beat' (so to speak) you had in mind when your wrote it.
Umm An-Nu'man
Munaqaba08- Staff
- Registration date : 2008-10-29
Re: Where would I be without Allah?
MashaAllah sister Aisha, it'll speak to alot of people.
Mabsoota- Staff
- Registration date : 2008-10-29
Re: Where would I be without Allah?
Mashallah sister that was beautiful, thank you for sharing
UmmBahirah
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Re: Where would I be without Allah?
Masha Allah a very touching poem, many of us can relate to it.
Zaza- Staff
- Registration date : 2008-10-29
Re: Where would I be without Allah?
JazakumAllahu khairan dear sisters - I'm glad that you liked it.
I appreciate your suggestion dear sister umm An-Nu'man jazakiAllahu khairan but it would change the rhythm and the actual meaning. To give you a better idea of the rhythm there is a pause at each comma.I have been in situations which, when I recall now, make me shudder!
Aisha- Administrator
- Registration date : 2008-10-28
Re: Where would I be without Allah?
Sounds good!
Umm An-Nu'man
Munaqaba08- Staff
- Registration date : 2008-10-29
Re: Where would I be without Allah?
It's a lovely poem, MashaAllah :D
Amina Al-Bateeka- Active Sister
- Registration date : 2008-11-13
Re: Where would I be without Allah?
mashaAllah thats wonderful sis jazkallah khair for sharing
Guest- Guest
Re: Where would I be without Allah?
I love this poem.
It is so true.
founder- .
- Registration date : 2008-04-05
Re: Where would I be without Allah?
Wa Alaykum Assalaam wa Rahmatullahi wa Barakaatuh
MashaAllah this is so beautiful and true. Jazak Allahu khayr.
MashaAllah this is so beautiful and true. Jazak Allahu khayr.
ummTayyibah- Getting active
- Registration date : 2009-01-31
Re: Where would I be without Allah?
beautiful poem Sister Aisha. really makes you think for sharing
naturedelight09- Active Sister
- Registration date : 2008-11-03
Re: Where would I be without Allah?
Wa jazakumAllahu khairan dear sisters - I am glad that you liked it
Aisha- Administrator
- Registration date : 2008-10-28
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